Monday, March 29, 2010

What makes you happy?

Have you ever wondered you are a happy person or not. It means that you have what you want, you feel satisfied with your life, etc. However, it is hard to find a common answer for this question because everyone has their own feeling of happiness. It can be a piece of cake when you feel hungry, a shoulder of passion when you feel sad, even a look from anyone. Indeed, there are many reasons lead to our own happiness. For me, cozy family, good health, and true love are three factors to make me happy.

First of all, to me, my family is the most wonderful place in the world. I have grown up in my parents' love, so they not only take care of me carefully but also teach me how to become a good human. When I feel sad, my mother stands by me to share and console me. Also, they always encourage me to overcome difficulties in my life. Now I am living far from home for study, so it is really happy for me to reunite with my family on holidays. Not for me, I believe that almost people who live far from home all feel happy when coming back their hometowns, getting together and enjoying cozy meals with their families. In fact, happiness comes from such simple things. Do not pursue happiness in a certain far place. If you still live in a cozy family with your parents' love, treasure it!

Furthermore, heath also plays an important role in a happy life. Sound mind in a sound body is a state of being that everyone wants to achieve. A strong body without illness will make us study and work more effectively. Besides, a sound mind is a state of being optimistic, unworried, and peaceful. Just compare between a sound mind person and a pessimistic person who always has creases in her face. Certainly, the first person will able to take trust from people around more than another person. Thus, life will bring many opportunities and joy for those have soundness in their mind. For example. I used to be taken to hospital when I was 10 years old. At that time, I got feverish that I could not move from the bed. I felt tired and disappointed so much, because I had not enjoyed my life yet, my dreams are still in my mind. After 3 week for treatment, I gradually recovered from the disease and could smile, play like the other children. My parents hugged me and cried in happiness. Then, I realized how precious health is! If we are not healthy enough, we hardly make our dreams come true.

Lastly, I would like mention about the power of love in a happy life. When we love someone, we will have motivation to make us more perfect. For example, in high school, I had a love at the first sight with a boy in my class. Can you believe that I could smile when I saw him smiling? From a ugly girl, I begin to take care of my appearance more beautiful, so I felt more confident and proud of myself in front of people. Also, he and I promised with each other to study well. From a bad maths studying student, I became a good student ranked 6th in my class. My love motivate me do such many things. Besides, love also bring us the feeling of safety and happiness. There are many things children hardly show their parents, so we always need to have a trust shoulder to pour comfort into our heart whenever we are in bad mood. Also, your lover is always by your side when you feel sad and he will take the sorrow away from you. Love itself make life more colorful and beautiful.

In conclusion, there are three main reasons contribute to my happiness. Family is my house, health is power for me to support my house, and love is a paintbrush to make my house more beautiful. To me, It not difficult to catch happiness. It is always exist by your side if you know how to treasure things you have.

3 comments:

  1. firstly, your thesis did not show the reason why you feel happy from your family, health, love
    secondly, you made 4 grammer mistakes
    lastly, you need to show feeling of happiness more, you just showed that you realized how precious health is

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  2. INTRODUCTION (2ms)
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    - Language: Grammar, vocabulary (1.6)
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